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I’m not great with expressing pronunciation in written form, and I don’t seem to have all the diacritical markings I would need available, so please bear with me.
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General - Is there any way to increase the baseline range of the tones? Like making the highs a bit higher and the lows a bit lower? It would increase the feeling of animacy in the voices, which increases listener engagement. Additionally, just increasing the overall baseline tone range would make it easier for beginners to differentiate tones, which is super challenging for most beginners. As a separate matter, it may be worthwhile to exaggerate the tone range of certain words even more than the baseline range. Words such as greetings, adjectives, interjections, etc, may need to have an even more extended tone range, beyond the baseline, because a human voice is generally more animated in these types of words than in other parts of speech.
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General - If I’m being honest, so far much of the audio doesn’t sound quite right to me.
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OSIYO/SIYO - To me it sounds like it’s saying the highest tone in this word is the “si”, and has an down-up-down / inverted V shape to my ear. Like maybe it’s saying something like 2-3-2 or 2-4-32 (or similar). I don’t know, but a definite inverted V shape with “si” being the highest note. But when I hear “osiyo” in practice and in recordings like the audio of Durbin in SSW Lessons 19 and 20, I hear it as ascending tones, with the ending “yo” being the highest. Like maybe ‘long2-quick3-quick4’ or maybe a ‘long2-quick2-quick4’. I don’t know, but definitely “yo” being the highest note.
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VV - This is a hard one. I think there are two issues. First, the sound itself (the v) doesn’t sound clear. Like, at 3:00 it sounds kinda like “vvowvvgh”, and at 3:06 I hear something like “vvowvvh”, almost like the sound changes between various letters within the word rather than staying a consistent “vv” sound that simply shifts pitch. Does that make sense? It makes it sound garbled. The “v” at 3:11 sounds somewhat clearer, though it still has a weird breathiness on the end, almost like “vgh”, “vth” or “vff” or something. The second issue is the tones of the first two “vv”s. On the one at 3:00, I hear it dip in pitch in the middle, kind of shaped like the character Ꮴ. Something like maybe ‘long3-quick2-quick32’. But I feel like the “vv” tones really need to be more like ‘quick2-quick32’. I hear it as having pretty much the same tones as ama /water, perhaps with a titch more of a downslur on the tail. Compare the tones in this audio https://www.cherokeedictionary.net/share/99686 with your audio at 3:00 and 3:06, you can hear the difference.
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VHLA - On the audio, this sounds like it’s stepping up in tone. Like maybe something like “quick2-quick32’. Definitely going uphill. But doesn’t both “no” and “not” have a different downhill tone? I hear “vhla” as a ‘long4-quick2’. For reference, listen to Ed say it multiple times in this video from about 34:42 to 35:57. https://youtu.be/RikNifUTETQ Also, the one at 10:20 sounds to me like “ahla”, like it’s saying something’s laying there, not “vhla” / “no”.
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AYO- This sounds likes it’s going downhill, with the highest tone coming first. Whereas I know “ayo” to be said in a strong uphill shape, like ‘quick1-quick4’ perhaps with a bit of trailing downslur. Being an interjection of pain/surprise, there’s a lot of distance between the tones and that 4 is real high. For reference, it’s said by Juksvsd in the Inage’i cartoon at about -20:07.
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HOWA - Sounds fine to me.
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TOHI/TOHIJU Some of the these sound sufficient. I would argue that they’d be better with the “ju” a bit higher, and there might need to be more distance between the low tone on the “to” and the extrahigh tone in the “hi”, and that as they are now the the “tohi”s and “tohiju”s sound really flat and uninterested, too monotone, not like how I hear it in real life. Greeting words and adjectives tend to sound more lively to my ear.
Edit- I was just thinking… is it possible that there’s a problem with YT or a problem on my end or something, since so many of these sound off to me? Has anyone else listened to them and given feedback? Any first language speakers?