Jahy-sama wa Kujikenai! - 03

[The0x539]

[00:33] \fad to white should use \t(\3c\4c) instead
[03:36] Punchline timing issue
[16:27] A semi-ellipsis would be a pretty nice meme, and it sort of works here, but I doubt it was intentional
[22:26] This is a weird sentence fragment

[02:24] Lower-left corner of mask has an aliased white line on the edge; if my guess as to what's happening is correct, the \clip on the "shading layer" should be given a slight shift
[06:33] "shading layer" on the middle "😈" banner covers the white too strongly, even compared to the other two. The black "De Vil" also looks washed out next to the symbol in the middle.
[14:23] Dialogue covers "Closed" TS, which doesn't appear in any other shot