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 When I was at university I remember chomping at the bit to be writing real applications. 
 
-You have your whole career to do this. Things like code architecture, writing testable code etc, in my opinion, universities are not particularly good at teaching anyway - because chances are the lecturer's do not have extensive industry experience!
+You have your whole career to do this. Things like code architecture, writing testable code etc, in my opinion, universities are not particularly good at teaching anyway - because chances are the lecturers do not have extensive industry experience!
 
 Instead what universities are good for, is teaching the more theoretical/academic aspects of computing - algorithmic complexity, computer architecture etc. 
 
 This kind of thing is perhaps not so useful when you're trying to learn a JavaScript framework, and just getting the code to _work_ but becomes more relevant several years down the track when you're trying to eek out every bit of performance you can. 
 
-As it relates to university - I think the ideal thing would be to be working as a software developer for several years before going to university. I think having already been working as a software engineer is likely to give you a greater appreciation of what you're learning at university - and it's also going to make the university work a lot easier - as you're not struggling with basic syntax. 
+As it relates to university - I think the ideal thing would be to be working as a software developer for several years before going to university.
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+I think having already been working as a software engineer is likely to give you a greater appreciation of what you're learning at university - and it's also going to make the university work a lot easier - you're not struggling with basic syntax. 
 
 With that said - the practical reality for a lot of people is that no place is going to hire them as a software engineer straight out of high school - and so going to university is simply the practical step forward.