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Adagrams
Major Learning Goals/Code Review
| Criteria | yes/no, and optionally any details/lines of code to reference |
|---|---|
| Correctly creates and calls methods with proper syntax (parameters, return statements, etc.) | ✔️ |
| Uses correct syntax for conditional logic and iteration | ✔️ |
| Practices git with at least 3 small commits and meaningful commit messages | Please commit more often. It will be helpful for future projects. |
Utilizes unit tests to verify code; tests can run using the command $ rake and we see test successes and/or failures |
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| Practices pair programming; the reflection question on pair programming is answered | ✔️ |
Functional Requirements
| Functional Requirement | yes/no |
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For the draw_letters method, there is an appropriate data structure to store the letter distribution. (You are more likely to draw an 'E' than an 'X'.) |
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Utilizes unit tests to verify code; all tests for draw_letters and uses_available_letters? pass |
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Utilizes unit tests to verify code; all tests for score_word pass |
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Utilizes unit tests to verify code; all tests for highest_score_from pass |
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Overall Feedback
| Overall Feedback | Criteria | yes/no |
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| Green (Meets/Exceeds Standards) | 4+ in Code Review && 3+ in Functional Requirements | ✔️ |
| Yellow (Approaches Standards) | 3+ in Code Review && 2+ in Functional Requirements | |
| Red (Not at Standard) | 0-2 in Code Review or 0,1 in Functional Reqs, or assignment is breaking/doesn’t run with less than 5 minutes of debugging |
Code Style Bonus Awards
Was the code particularly impressive in code style for any of these reasons (or more...?)
| Quality | Yes? |
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| Perfect Indentation | ✅ |
| Elegant/Clever | ✅ |
| Descriptive/Readable | ✅ |
| Concise | ✅ |
| Logical/Organized | ✅ |
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Assignment Submission: Adagrams
Congratulations! You're submitting your assignment. Please reflect on the assignment with these questions.
Reflection
Enumerablemixin? If so, where and why was it helpful?