more patchouli revisions, rephrasing, etc. #8
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Aug 6, 2024
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- Removed duplicate entries
- Resolved some (hopefully all) spelling and grammar errors
- Made ship.json more readable in terms of page groupings (so that it's easier to organize something like the scale-related spells being on the same group)
- Renamed "Boatwright's Prfn." to "Spyglass Prfn."
- Renamed "Boatwright's Dstl." to "Christening Dstl."
- Renamed "Cloaking Purification" to "Murky Purification". Cloaking is still the term for when a ship yknow does the thing, I just thought it might be a little repetitive. Probably overthinking.
- Renamed all spells with "Yeet" or "Push" in the name to use "Shove"
- "Return" terminology in pattern descriptions changed to use "push"
- my final message garagoglomious garagooper tinjanabralologo hraere
grammar and a little more rephrasing
untested
more minor rephrases some patterns have been renamed Moreiotas: Boatwright'ss Prfn. -> Spyglass Prfn. Boatwright's Dstl. -> Christening Dstl.
Cloaking Purification -> Murky Purification
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