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Thanks so much!
I do prefer to make changes myself. Could you list what you found?
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Sure, no problem. Would commenting my changes on README.md file work for you? |
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Yes, that would be great, thanks in advance.
Norm
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Changes commented for your review
| > include spaces, and must start with a letter.) | ||
| Note that **n81100** now is a 21-element vector. Its first element is | ||
| Note that **n81100** now is a 20-element vector. Its first element is |
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Incorrect vector length n81100
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| So the 4th, 8th, 9th etc. elements in **Nile** had the queried property. | ||
| (Note that those were years 1875, 1879 and so on.) | ||
| (Note that those were years 1874, 1878 and so on.) |
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Correction on corresponding years for Nile data
| i.e. the height, weight and age of that person. | ||
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| **Note that that row would also be cnsidered a vector. The third column | ||
| **Note that that row would also be considered a vector. The third column |
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Typo
| > ?ToothGrowth | ||
| ``` (The data turn out to be on guinea pigs, with orange juice or | ||
| ``` | ||
| (The data turn out to be on guinea pigs, with orange juice or |
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Note was written on the same line as previous code fence so it didn't appear as distinct line
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| ``` r | ||
| > nrow(ToothGrowth) | ||
| > nrow(tg) |
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Previous and following code blocks use tg as shorthand for ToothGrow so these can be changed to tg to stay consistent
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| So, the risk of diabetes increases substantial over that 10-year period, | ||
| So, the risk of diabetes increases substantially over that 10-year period, |
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Should be adverb; typo
| * The condition within the 'while' says that (a) we are not yet at the | ||
| end of the **airpass** vector, AND (b) our total is still less than | ||
| 10000. | ||
| end of the **airpass** vector, AND (b) our total is still less than 10000. |
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This didn't appear correctly in html form so moved 10,000 to previous line
| There's more, though. The **cumsum** function is vectorized, so using | ||
| it, though seemingly wasteful, may actually be faster than the loop | ||
| it, though seemingly wasteful, may actually be faster than the loop. |
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Period missing
| ## <a name="ide"> Installing and Using IDEs </a> | ||
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| An *interactive development environment* (IDE) is a software tool that | ||
| An *integrated development environment* (IDE) is a software tool that |
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Did you mean "integrated"?
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Integrated_development_environment
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| The real "power users" tend to use either Emacs Speaks Statistics (ESS), | ||
| a plugin for the Emacs editor, or Nvim-r,, a plugin for the vim editor. | ||
| a plugin for the Emacs editor, or Nvim-r, a plugin for the vim editor. |
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