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| #Mad Libs Generator Project | ||
| //Loop back to this point once code finishes | ||
| loop = 1 | ||
| while (loop < 9): |
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loop will need to run for <24 instead of 9
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I have added some helpful comments! Please review and let me know if you have questions.
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| #Mad Libs Generator Project | |||
| //Loop back to this point once code finishes | |||
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It is more typical in Python to include comments using # instead if /
| #Mad Libs Generator Project | ||
| //Loop back to this point once code finishes | ||
| loop = 1 | ||
| while (loop < 9): |
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Consider changing that 9 to 11 - would a for loop be a better fit here?
| // Displays the story based on the users input | ||
| print ("------------------------------------------") | ||
| print ("Be kind to your",noun,"- footed", plural_noun) | ||
| print ("For a duck may be somebody's", seond_noun,",") |
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Typo alert! Change seond to second!
| print ("------------------------------------------") | ||
| print ("Be kind to your",noun,"- footed", plural_noun) | ||
| print ("For a duck may be somebody's", seond_noun,",") | ||
| print ("Be kind to your",plural_noun,"in",place) | ||
| print ("Where the weather is always",adjective,".") | ||
| print () | ||
| print ("You may think that is this the",third_noun,",") | ||
| print ("Well it is.") | ||
| print ("------------------------------------------") |
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Would this be more efficient as a single f string?
Additionally, consider injecting some humor into your MadLib. This doesn't give our user many opportunities for laughter!
| print ("Well it is.") | ||
| print ("------------------------------------------") | ||
| // Loop back to "loop = 1" | ||
| loop = loop + 1 |
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Consider adding a feature where the user can exit after creating a MadLib, rather than looping over 10 times.
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